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Reviewer: MotorDrive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 08:03:59 pm Title: Chapter 15: Celestial

Now that I've finished reading the story, I have to say this: "Wow." In the good sense, of course. Especially with what happened to 4 of the fivefold.

(Random nitpick: Aren't Felix and Jenna siblings, so wouldn't they be of the same lineage?)

Reviewer: MotorDrive Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2009 03:23:37 pm Title: Chapter 9: A Star of Venus

Even though this comment is probably way too late, I think you have "Part III: Clash on Venus Aerie" posted twice in chapter 9.

Anyway, interesting story so far. Also mad props for bringing in Lu Bu + Red Hare into the story. XD

Reviewer: Mercury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 09:24:46 am Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

This is possibly the best fic' on the whole site!

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Date: June 07, 2007 05:37:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

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Reviewer: Keira Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2006 06:26:51 am Title: Chapter 15: Celestial

Uau, this story is great. It took me a lot of my time to finhis it ^^ U know U could become a very good writher in the future.

Author's Response: Wow, you actually read it all already? And so soon after you joined! ^__^ I'm flattered. - - - Yup, I intend to become a writer someday. I've already written eighty or so pages of original fiction last month, and I won't be stopping there. Of course, I'm still trying to perfect my style. ^_^;; This was my first fanfic, after all, so I haven't been in the business long.

Reviewer: Samos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 02:13:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

Amazing. I've been looking for some way to fit the summons/guardians into the storyline for ages. this works perfectly. BUT the story mentions Yegelos as the founder of Anemos, but he was the hero of CONTIGO thus he came from a different time period. Also I have pondered where the ilse in the sea in the golden age (the one in the middle of the cresent shaped continent, was Lemuria or possible Indra. Remember Indra is only in that psition in gs2 because of the tidal wave.... I'm really confused about that, cos lemuria definately existed back then, but then how did it get so small afterwards?? my head hurts now so I'll shut up. Anyway great story.

Author's Response: That's a very valid point. But the way I explain it, after Anemos fled to Luna, the people of Contigo decided to rewrite history a little to cover up Anemos' tracks, so to speak. Thus, Yegelos, once the hero of Anemos, became the hero of Contigo instead. But remember, essentially, Contigo was part of Anemos. So a hero of Anemos would be a hero of Contigo as well. As for the issue of Lumeria, the isle in the Sea is Lumeria, and Lumeria alone: which, in the Golden Age, covered the entire Sea of Time area. However, due to erosion it slowly became the size you see in the games. As for Indra, it was a part of the main continent, but as Gaia Falls eroded the land, a river (of my own invention) between the land of Indra and everything else grew immensely and eventually seperated Indra from the rest of the continent. The tidal wave effectively slammed it back into place. Well, I hope that helped explain my story a bit. ^_^ It's really helpful to have someone question the validity of the plot details I chose, so thanks, both for the review and the criticism.

Reviewer: The Adepts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2006 11:15:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

10 10 10!!! your wording describes everything perfectly...it's like being right there when it happened!

Author's Response: ^_^ That's what I try to aim for. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: 3il30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2006 05:35:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

That was good, very good. This gets a ten. I wonder if anyone has put up an unofficial timeline of GS...this would fit in quite well. I hope to see much more.

Author's Response: Thanks. In fact, that's what I plan on doing... Fivefold, Pleiades, as well as a few others I have planned, will eventually fill out the whole history of Weyard. Provided I see it through, that is.

Reviewer: Xenzu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2006 04:27:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

Another good story.....i'm begining to think my stuff doesn't compare lol nice work you deffinitly got some talent

Author's Response: No, I'm sure you'll develop with time. I'm glad you think I have some bit of talent in this poor, empty brain of mine. V_V Seriously, I don't even know how I come up with this stuff.

Reviewer: Deathwish Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22, 2005 11:00:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Renaissance

this story blows me away. i cant even compete with this!

Author's Response: You're too kind, really. Thanks.

Reviewer: Waeyon_thunderlord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2005 01:25:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: Pursuit

The whole story thus far has been amazing!

A rating of 10 can't even begin to describe it

Author's Response: Thanks for staying with this story to the end, and that goes for everyone else too.

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