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Date: December 08, 2014 03:25:39 am Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: FlamingMage Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2007 09:41:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Ak...valeshipping.. -.- aside from my prefrences, this was good. no major flaws, good story concept =P. you may want to remove the "in case you haven't guessed", it makes you sound a bit bloated '.' . but whatever. great story, please write more you get a duck. --O-O--/

Reviewer: skachofski Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 11:26:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Masamune1031 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 11:39:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice but i can't stand wind shipping. Otherwiswe nice.

Reviewer: The Silver Cross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 03:20:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely hillarious. I definitely got a kick out of the part when Mia slaps Garet. Slightly out of character on her part, but funny nonetheless. Also, the proposal scene was sweet. Gotta love Valeshipping, people. XD *shot* Anyways, you have a great writing style, and keep it up!

Reviewer: Chaos Sora Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2007 06:09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is friggin hillarious!

I love the part where Garet got was so funny.

You should write a serious story. You got you just need a plot line and conflict!

Reviewer: Roxas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2006 08:12:09 am Title: Chapter 1

nice couple arangements.Garet and^_^
"Free Pass To Dora's Delicious Breakfasts/Brunches/Lunches/Dinners. Valid For Only 3 Weeks. Signed: Isaac"

Garet continued to grin.


"Is my cooking not GOOD ENOUGH?" Mia asked.

"No its really good, just that its not, well, ENOUGH. I need more to get by the day!" Garet replied while nursing the back of his head.


Reviewer: in_lastagain Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2006 10:34:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Your story was actually quite interesting. Although not everyone has to be a couple you know. Personally I like the Jenna and Isaac combonation. Oh yeah! The thing about the marriage thing was unexpected for me. Although, like everyone says, it was a little fast. The the thing about the bribe. It's not actually a bribe but more like a dowery. A momento of someone so you wont forget them. It's a cultural thing.

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Date: September 04, 2006 10:15:46 am Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: everything_adept Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 04:54:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was great! Keep up the good work and make it even better. Why wasn't humor on the list of genres?

Reviewer: 3il30 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2006 06:06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Like everyone else...i have to say that was sudden. but i do understand the match up between Isaac and Jenna. In GS2, wasn't there a conversation about Jenna and Isaac being an "item"? And why does Piers always seem to end up with a random Lemurian girl in all these stories? Oh well...

Reviewer: fire_guardian_flame Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2006 05:08:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I like the match ups except, i prefer Jenna and Garet and Mia and Isaac, and like everyone else, I think it was a little rushed, he says he loves her, 5 min later he proposes and also, the slap at the end is a kind of Jenna thing. But I like the Ivan-Sheba and Kay-Felix thing.

Reviewer: Grand Terramancer Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 08:09:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Sorry about before, I just got caught up with the irrelevant personal opinion about who should go with who. In doing this, I forgot to mention some of the reasons why I didn't like the story.
Issac admitting his love was rushed. Also, why would Felix have to be bribed? If Felix, didn't approve of the marriage, I doubt a new sword (one better then the sol blade or Excalibur?) would be a high enough prise to convince him to get his sister to go along with it. If Felix did approve, and believed that Jenna and Isaac would be happy together, then he wouldn't have needed to be bribed.

Author's Response: Thanks for your opinions, I'll take them into consideration for my next few pieces. For your first post I understand what your trying to say, and I agree with it. Isaac and Jenna don't compliment each other. However the way I see it, they rather, complete each other. In love, people don't go for the ones they see exactly like them, that would make it feel like your dating your twin bro/sis. Opposites attract. Garet/Mia and Isaac/Jenna are ones that I like cause they show this theory. Jenna and Garet are more into the wild side while Isaac and Mia are calm, negatives and positives. About your second post, I agree again, the proposal was a bit rushed, but that's how I saw it in my mind. That's just the way I liked to put it and it is certainly open to criticism/comments. And about Felix, I just put that there because I feel Felix is a person to stand by and watch for these sort of circumstances. Not saying that he doesn't want it to happen, but he seems to keep to himself, so Isaac needed to persuade him for his help. The sword was just the only thing I could think of at that time (Its the thought that counts, I guess...?) that Felix might accept. Anyways, thank you for your feedback and I hope to hear more from you.

Reviewer: silverwolf Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 09:20:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Like Dant said, the proposal was a bit sudden. At the same time he confesses his love for her he proposes? It would have worked better as a story of a few chapters, in my opinion. On the whole, it was a good romance, could be improved, there's out of character bits in there and whatnot.

Author's Response: Everyone seems to be bugging me about that proposal aye? Well, if you read the above comment you'll see my answer to that. I will also take into mind that I should have written a bit more chapters. This was my first fanfic for anything, so I thought it should be short and sweet, wait for the comments and build on that. Thanks for your comment, and I always know that everything has room for improvement since nothing is perfect.

Author's Response: Forgot to add my view on some of the out of character parts. About the Mia smacking Garet, that is from being married to him. When a couple gets married and begin living with each other, they begin gaining the habits and attitudes of their partner. Mia might have gotten a bit more rough while being around Garet, or just adourned a whole new triat since Garet was sometimes too much.

Reviewer: Dante Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 08:11:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Haha, not bad, but.. Isaac's confession seems a little too sudden and out of the blue. One minute they're merely friends, the second they're engaged. Rarely would something work out that well in reality, but hey, it's a fic.
And I don't see a problem with Garet/Mia. If marriage is the union of two souls to form a complete whole, then opposites should attract.
Not only that, GS doesn't have many scenes for character development, so the ones we do have should be that much more important. Viewed in this light, the scene of Garet jumping to save Mia takes on a whole new importance, as well as Isaac and Jenna's little hints and the Madra blush scene.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And by the way, in my story if you look back, you read that when Isaac says he loves Jenna that she replies with, "I love you too, I always have." Since I explained Isaac had been very nervous and planning about this that the feeling was mutual.

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