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Reviewer: issacrocks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2008 03:09:28 pm Title: The Cake of Wonders

This is funny!!!

Reviewer: wind sorcerer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 07:17:08 pm Title: The Cake of Wonders

it's the same with me, I come up with everything as I write it , the thing is that it shouldn't be toooo long but neither toooooo short, otherwise some people won't find it interesting and won't want to read it, you need to try working a bit more on it, even when you finish a chapter you should try reading it again and try looking where can you add more stuff and add it, so the chapter would have a kind of good size not too long neither too short, I hope I'm not sounding too rude but I think that may help you

Author's Response: No, you don't sound rude at all. And thanks for the advice, I love it when people actually try to help instead of just complaining for no reason.

Reviewer: wind sorcerer Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 04:00:18 pm Title: The Cake of Wonders

xDDD evil Piers, well the ideas are good but you could have invented a bigger story detailing a bit more, putting more jokes in it and making it longer, I think it would have been better that way, but anyways you story is good

Author's Response: Thanks, but I think that if I have a large enough chapter, then it might be boring and tiresome to read. But don't worry! There will be more chapters to come and plenty of jokes for all of them. Did you know that I come up with all of the content for the stories right on the spot? That might be why the stories and chapters are too short.

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