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Reviewer: cai20160414 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2016 08:02:07 am Title: With Mia

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Reviewer: cai20160118 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2016 07:22:34 am Title: With Mia

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Reviewer: fire_guardian_flame Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2008 05:36:21 am Title: With Mia

*sighs* No offense, but you have to make your chapters longer. There shouldn't be a hyphen between pristine and blue. At least your grammar and spelling are alright. On the whole, it was extremely rushed, and I know these are ficlets, but quite honestly, you should try to make them longer. "Ivan was so sad, he wanted to cry." That line sounds sort of... childish. Put more information into the whole thing. And I don't think Mia would act that way... But yeah. It's your fic.

Author's Response: I know that they are rushed. I just type that way. I'll try to do better in my next ones. Btw, Mia was just like that for the story, I don't see her like that either.

Reviewer: wind sorcerer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2008 05:54:00 pm Title: What about Jenna?

0.0 what did Ivan heard?

Author's Response: He thought that she meant the American version of the phrase.

Reviewer: wind sorcerer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2008 05:53:25 pm Title: Sheba Off The Rebound

'she liked felix?'
xDDD

Author's Response: Why was he so surprised? He hadn't even talked to her yet.

Reviewer: wind sorcerer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 06:05:03 am Title: With Mia

Well the idea is good, and also the grammar but you should try inventing more stuff, the chapter is like too little, but it's okay I've done little chapters as well, anyways, this is good although I'm more of an Ivan/sheba and Ivan/Mia

Author's Response: I'm doing a new one with Ivan likeing a new charecter every weekend. And I'm doing an Ivan/Sheba one next. By the way, I don't like Ivan/Mia either. I just decided to start with them.

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